Mistake...
I think you made a mistake when you imput the dimentions of your movie as I can see off the stage while watching the movie. Try to change that. Also it could have been a bit longer, but it was really quite good for a first flash submission ...
nice one
this was another good one I would except no less of you keep at it!
Not bad
Like i said above, not too bad. The animations and stuff looked pretty good. Keep practicing though, 'cause if you're not getting better you're getting worse.
You ruined it with the white borders.
They ruined the depth and made the movie look stupid.
Everything else was alright though, so next time, PLEASE, don't have big white borders, and then you won't go far wrong.
cool
short, but the graphic designs in this animation were pretty good. good movie overall too.