Good use of editing
I didnt blam this cos you showed a good understanding of cinematic editing. However it was un-realistic, you kinda screwed up a lil, u can see the white background edges past the actual screen, which makes it look kinda tacky, rushed and shit. The music i hated, and I FUCKING HATE THE INTEGRA. Otherwise it was well drawn, well animated, showed a high level of cinematic promise, it just looked really tacky, and was way 2 short. Nothing much really happened to grip the audience, nothing exciting happened, and I just didnt care for any of the characters. So wait... Why did I give this 5 stars....
I really need to get back on my prozac...
Good editing, you'll be good in the industry, as long as u dont animate.