You underestimate yourself
This was a pretty good flash. It could've used more sound than just the music, but other than that you did great.
Reviews for "Snoofalah Sucks"
Nice but could have been better!
Well, a little bit of self-criticism is alway nice, isn't it? I quite liked the movie although the humour was not exactly like I usually prefer it. But all in all the graphics and the well-chosen elevator-like music convinced me to give this movie a vote which is better than average. I also had to take some points away concerning style. It was quite well, but I hated the font and the placement of the text.
Anyway it was good work!
And who the fuckity fuck are you, "scorchdragon?"
I think you're fulla shit, man. This cartoon's probably ten times better than what YOU can make with Flash.
Nice job on the flash. It's obvious you were pullin' for comedy for this one. And although many may not agree, I think this is pretty good. Have some pie. :-)
So does snoofalah=you, then
You might have esteem problems. anyways it was somewhat funny. Seeing what would happen to snoof next. So does a white bg have a meaning like the flash "purgatory". CS 3.1876
Snoofalah responds:
Yeah, in ways. Watch any of Ryan Khatam's cartoons. Most of his backrounds are white as well, but they're hilarious.
It was okay.
I enjoyed this one. It's quite unique. The graphics weren't that great nor the music but there was a bit of humor there. Ways to improve.
Make it more colorful- Almost everything was white. White is a very boring color. You could still keep it simple though. Simply color the ground green and the sky blue and it should be pretty good.
More detail- One example of one i didn't like was the scene at the bar. Decorate the place a little bit. Maybe put pictures on the wall, add more people, that kind of thing.
Music- Yours was okay but I found it, again, boring... a bit annoying as well. The muted trumpet's squeaking bothered me... it was okay but something else might be better. Try elevator music :p
On the scene with the guy shaking his head, make it bigger. He was practically a dot on the screen. Fill up the space.
Thanks for your submission.