In responce to you and Black-Lines
Well, it's good to know that it'll be a continuing series. I do want to know how this all works out...
I'm agreeing with Black-Lines though that the voice work could be improved a little. It needs more emotion, and volume. However, I may be the only one with the volume thing, I have to turn my speakers up for pretty much everything on NG.
A good submission I says. 4/5