great
nice job, it's good that you wanna continue. Maybe you can make it like, bi-weekly or something. in any case you better not "STOP or i'll fucking eat you"
Reviews for "Oh My God - Pilot"
ummm...ok?
I don't know what to say about this flash except very nice drawings but a pilot needs to be like a real episode...just as long and really needs to introduce the characters and bring in the story. but i couldn't rate this very high due to the shortness and few jokes in it. better luck next time.
YOu really need to continue this
Right now!I will not wait any longer, you must go on!!!! LOL The sound was very well done, and the entire cartoon was clean. The only negative thing I can say about it was it was too short
Needs more zest...
I'm very torn on this submission. On one hand, the graphics were outstanding and the introduction really grabs your attention, yet the rest of the animation seems to fall kind of flat.
The voice acting, while it certainly didn't seem forced or scripted, was, I'm sorry to say, extremely bland and left my uninterested. The timing and execution of the jokes throughout the movie also seemed to fall flat as a cause of this.
The plot seems to have potential, although nothing about this pilot was particularly awe inspiring or laugh out loud funny. Whilst you do already state that all will be explained in episodes two and three, you need to understand that the aim of a pilot is to grab the attention of the viewer and make them want to come back to watch the next episode. Your 'cliffhanger technique' would have worked, given that the animation was more structured. Particularly when the main character is hit by a car and suddenly realises he's god. This is in NEED of almost imediate explanation, on how he came to realise this in some form or another.
You have a lot of potential here, and obviously talent. Don't force yourself to churn out subpar animations due to your weekly dead line. Take more time on the script, pick up the pace on those jokes and you've got yourself a very proffesional looking and feeling animation.
Overall, I give it a 4.5. A lot of room for improvement, but you're halfway there.
-- GodsMistakeStudios
Wow
Cool, real nice animation! Great ideas and characters without going over the top. Hope this becomes a decent series soon.