In this case,, QUALITY MATERS!
Your on key, and on time,but it needs a TON of surgery in the recording departent! ??????????????????????? Master this track, and play it in your car before you re post it. Ive been there, trust me,, IT WORKS! God ear though, and nice timing!
What do you mean "surgury"? And I did play it, it sounded fine to me. Thanks for your comments though.
nice effort, but not good
During the chorus, you placed the chords at the wrong places (believe me, I work at the music institute and I've got absolute hearing), but you can still update it, nice effort though.
What are you talking about? I did NOT place the chords at the wrong places. Maybe those absolute ears of yours need a cleaning or something. Seriously, though, what are you talking about???????????? I made SURE that there were no mistakes. Thanks for your comments, though, I'll keep them in mind.