Sad?
This was not a sad work... when she looks all defiant and evil at the end, its not sad....learn human anatomy, and your works will come off a lot better... still, your graphics and style were as god as 90 percent of the stuff that passes as flash these days... mood can't be forced.... it just felt really....forced... keep trying though... uve definitely got a future.... which is more than i could say for most of these sad sack flash artists.... just stop forcing it, take some figure drawing classes and get there.... u can do it!