Great for a first flash
Sure, there is no shortage of DBZ flashes. Sure, it was short. Sure, it needed some BG music. However, it was hand drawn and had a punchline which made me chuckle. For your first outing, I would say it is excellent. You have talent, and I hope to see more from you in the future.
holy crap NALEM! o_O
Seems someone's making leaps and bounds on the old Flash ^^"
Not bad at all for a first submision, you have potential but hey I've seen your other stuff so we both knew that before you made this...
Not too good, but not too bad either...keep at it
I liked the Zelda stuff, and as this is your first flash.....and better than my attempts it seems:D, I am willing to give you pts. for that. You have talent, and may end up working for some cartoon studio some day.
Keep at it, and GL.:)
It's not your best but
it's your first and it's not bad for a first. Sound was pretty crappy but nice graphics.The end gave me a quick laugh.I prefer your other works but this is good anyway.
Ummmm...
Okay? It was a little funny.