You have promise, I'll give you that!
Well, it was a little short, yes, and to be honest it was wihtout a storyline as well but I did laugh when Sketch randomly cut his hand off for absolutely no reason so I think it deserves to stay! And as I didn't get a protection point, looks like it did! Congratulations, you show a lot of promise, and humour!
Borderline
"You gave this entry a 2, raising its score from 1.6126 to 1.6135!
You're the saviour! You are one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal! "
That was close.
Well, you have a decent style, but everything needs work: Plot, graphics, SOUND EFFECTS...
But all in all, you've got something. Keep working.
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pretty good.... a lil short tho...
Yea i know it's only a poilet ep it took me 20mins and thanks for the feedbak
I see too madness in this...
It looks too familiar to madness: the character, the the easy tone of violence and blood, even the pie. The story was also pretty cheesy.
Sorry, not my kind of flash.
Story??????wat story r u blind it's a piolet ep man you just wait until i release the real ep but thanks for the feedback and it took me like 20mins
nice work
I quite enjoyed that, i really loved how the character looked and the style you use, the music was ok, the humour was good too, something worth protecting =).