I loved it
The action was kindof slow, but who cares? It was your first flash. I liked it, I can see why it won an award. You have some real potential. I think, if you had the time, this would be one of the best flashes on Newgrounds.
I loved it
The action was kindof slow, but who cares? It was your first flash. I liked it, I can see why it won an award. You have some real potential. I think, if you had the time, this would be one of the best flashes on Newgrounds.
i liked it!
twas good esp the graphics.. for a first timer, u have skill.... the music matched the mood set... gave u a 4 yesterday coz the storyline was kiiiiiinda weak:P but n1 in general:D
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this is good!
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^^Good Points^^
A very good effort and an interesting movie. Though the storyline has no voices and really no people or characters, it still has an interesting storyline, which is neat. I liked the sound effects, and the song was good even though it didn't have much to do with the movie.
^^Needs Improving^^
The art could have used the most improving. I see you didn't really use and shading at all, which is pretty easy to do. Also, you used a large paintbrush quite a bit, which just looks unprofessional. I think the introduction at the beginning are really too long. They are almost as long as the movie itself...
Good feel to it.
I can see how this won you first place at a Regional Computer Fair.
It had a good message. If people like what your saying they wont care what they are looking at. Can I ask you why its called the end of time?
My original idea was much longer, but since i was very short on time i had to cut some out...but for the final version that im making for the state level competion will have a complete "collapse", "explosion" whatever you want to call it of the universe...hence the "End of Time"