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Reviews for "System Failure (ad mix)"

cool

i like it

huaha

Producer: Very nice structure & tune. Bit repeative, but overally very good work.

Vocalist: Whispering vocals are nice, but you could use some stronger vocals too. For two reasons; It gets boring if its all whispering and second it doesnt stand out too much. Either scream or do something similiar to "angry man's voice" if you know what I mean. For example like "Faderhead - TZDV".

In/out

Adore the lyrics.

Pretty Epic

Indeed it IS pretty epic, however, the vocals on the chorus could use a bit more synching up with the beat (And maybe replace them with something else. I know they are probably the lyrics you want to use but, well...They sound a bit...out of place from the song). Not bad however! Keep it up!

Pretty damn epic!

I love it, but the vocals are a bit too... vague. They need to be clearer, louder. But you still get a 10/10 for this!