Great Intro, decent cartooning
I like the art style on most of the characters, but artistically, I don't feel that Bar fits in with the rest of the cast. Stylistically, it's jarring. The choice of music however, I didn't care much for. I like both songs, but I don't think Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous is the best choice for this piece. The song seems unrelated to the cartoon.
Just a couple of things...
It was ok, but I think you've gotten a lot of friends to vote or something, because the score you have (about 3.4 ATM) is high as far as I'm concerned.
Anyway, that said, it was still decent. Suggestions:
1. If you're going to put words on the screen, leave then there long enough to be read. Twice you put some things up and they were gone before there was any chance I could read them (both may have been in the intro though).
2. Flash is not chat. The abbreviations OMG, WTH, etc., used in dialog is kind of dunb. But then, that's just my opinion, and this is no big deal.
3. For God's sake, work on your sound quality! There are only about a million sound editing tools out there, and many free ones, that you can use to edit your soundtrack and clean it up.
Good job otherwise.
1. most people read faster than me. and complained when the words were too long on the screen.
2. Yeah, well, tough luck. I still use them.
3. It's not me, it's Flash.
It's okay
It could have used more of the funny. This one was kind of confusing. I did like the music you used though.
very talented and great sense of humor
just wanted to start out by saying that i wish i could write to you in hebrew.
as for the animation, you are obviously very talented. your sense of humor is right on target and your voice acting is excellent. you just have to get a little farther away from the mic and your sound quality will be better. the only thing i didn't like in the flash, or not so much didn't like but that needs improving are your drawing skills. that's the only thing that drew away form truely enjoying.
but good luck and keep up the good work.
ugh. people keep telling me I need to work on my drawing skills without actually telling me what to work on!
yes yes great animation----but to the last preview
Its from cd reise reise.
what a stupid shit you got to be. I mean god---write in google or something the name of the band and i bet youl see their latest album.
Go shoot your self
Dude, jeez, go easy on the guy, all he did was ask what album it was from!