Just a couple of things...
It was ok, but I think you've gotten a lot of friends to vote or something, because the score you have (about 3.4 ATM) is high as far as I'm concerned.
Anyway, that said, it was still decent. Suggestions:
1. If you're going to put words on the screen, leave then there long enough to be read. Twice you put some things up and they were gone before there was any chance I could read them (both may have been in the intro though).
2. Flash is not chat. The abbreviations OMG, WTH, etc., used in dialog is kind of dunb. But then, that's just my opinion, and this is no big deal.
3. For God's sake, work on your sound quality! There are only about a million sound editing tools out there, and many free ones, that you can use to edit your soundtrack and clean it up.
Good job otherwise.