HOw many times must it be said...
YOU CAN'T MAKE A GOOD FLASH SIMPLY THROUGH GOOD GRAPHICS!!!
I have said this to many people, and I will probably continue to say it until I'm blue in the fingers.
You can NOT make a good flash by relying on good graphics. You need a good story, good animation, good plot development, good characters, and good beginning, middle, and end. Like making a movie, you can NOT make a good movie just on good special effects. Don't ask me for an example, just go to the local theater.
The artwork here deserves an 11 or a 12. but the animation is almost non-existent. There are small scene shanges (moving camera) and some animations, not to mention fading movements (starts in one place, fades out, fades in in another place).
The sound is not bad, good for the scene.
HOWEVER:
The story is more confusing than anything i've ever seen. I watched it fully through and I STILL don't understand it. You need to omit the haiku at the beginning and put a bit of an introduction. More for the viewers to read while waiting for the massive thing to load.
AND IT"S SO LONG!!!
Not bad, sir...but not good enough for me. It is too long with not good enough animation. The artwork doesn't save that