review
I'll start with the negative, then I'll get into the positive, then I'll finish it with my pizza order
Cons:
That line at 1:37 didn't work. Ok, maybe not the line itself, but the synth you chose didn't sound right to me at all.
Snares seem a bit too spread apart, but that may be the speed involved here, what bpm is this at?
The line that begins at 3:09 is ok, but in the high parts of your melody there, that synth seems to be going outside it's comfort range
I think your hi hat could have used either a longer or shorter release, I don't think it's working great as it is. Either a crisp closed sound or a longer open fallout would have worked wonders there.
Pros:
LOVED the snare rolls. Sounded awesome
The techno beginning with the hip hop drums isn't normally done very well, but you pulled it off well
The synth at 1 minute is done really well.
Overall:
Not bad, but I'd still say it's a bit more techno than hip hop. All the same, cool track and congratulations on #1.
Also, I'll have a medium pepperoni pizza and a bottle of coke. It's my understanding that it is 30 minutes or it's free?