hmmmmmmmm
well then i like the concept but i dont understand the super hero thing i think this is and the oracle comes out of nowhere and gives him the bracelet things hmm you need to work on it but i think you can make something great and i thought that crimson shield name was taken already...
and also try to change the music the i dont know that type of music doesnt really match a super hero even in his darkened days.. good job keep working on it