Reviews for AVATAR MAKER

[M-A-R-C-U-S]

hah, heartless bastard!

i knew he'd bloody well kill him :P lol, pretty good idea for the ending also, but you dragged it on for too long i think. it would have been better if he haid said 'it' once, Perry attempt to shoot him, then continue on the everlasting cycle of moojamhadanswi's, lol.
pretty funny first half though :)
6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)

[Geodetic]

Ack

It's a very bare construct, and it looks like it still needs a little work.

I like the concept, but I think you've taken a step in the wrong direction somewhere. For one, who wants a child as an avatar? Plus, no sound?

[Smith]

ok

that wasn't that cool and what the hell is a AVATAR