OK
I think you need to work on some kind of storyline before you submit your next flash. your animation was pretty good though. It's just that this flash didn't really have a point to it.
anyway don't listen to all of the people blamming you, if you keep at it you'll make something good
Violence. Violence. Violence.
And a really bad voice-over. That is the entirety of this cartoon.
The choice of having the football player crucify the kindly nerd with the annoying voice and strangely, sickeningly carefree attitude is unsettling. It makes some obvious points that I dare not suggest here. But I'm sure you can all figure them out.
I have noticed that high school tends to be very mass-oriented, that "looking like everyone else" is pretty much what decides if you're cool or not.
However, I think the football/lacrosse (?) player put it best when he described the nerd. I'd like to use his words to describe this flash, unless you're an angst-filled violent person who likes blood to look like scribbles.
"[this flash is] a worthless piece of shit"