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awesome intro
very good panning
Good:
As said the intro and paining, good build up, i like the piano and the deepness
good beat too
Bad:
Only one thing, that is..
it could use a really powerfull outro.
Other:
U seriously talented!!!
Helth
5'd
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wow, thanks! I really appreciate the review, and thanks so much for the 5 and 10!! I will try and work on the outro more on my future songs, I just got too anxious to post it on Newgrounds ;)
-gw-
Nice... really nice!
This is a great song man, you did a very good job.
I can't really hear any mistakes, so i'm sorry, i just have to give you a ten :P
This song is not repetitive at all and that's really good :D
Keep it up!
10/10
5/5
MH16
wow, thank you so much! I really appreciate the ten! Thanks for the review!!! :D
-gw-
Awesome.
Peaceful, fluent, slow start that opens up into a great beat and tune.
What makes the best part of this is that you stuck to one tune but built off it in multiple directions with multiple instruments. so this doesnt transition over to a whole nother song almost but also isnt repetitive.
great job!
Wow, man
You've really outdone yourself, GW. This is great. I always love a song that keeps the same general tones but changes in instrumentation and beat. The only real criticism I have, is that it seems kinda anti-climactic. I was just waiting for something truly epic to happen at the 2:30 mark or so... but it never really happened. Truly a nice song though, man. Thanks for sharing!
yes, thank you for the input, I will have to change that around for my next version of this song ;)
-gw-
:-)
I really like this song...A LOT! Just so you know anyways. Btw, there is slight clipping in areas. Lower your fader like [ ] much and it should be fine.
I like the new instrument that kicks in around 1:12. It has a very nice and yet weird quality to it. It really mixes well with the piano as well.
Ther percussion at 1:38 is FUCKING AWESOME! Although, I think you could do slightly more with the kick, and maybe one or two other drums there. Maybe some light congas there? Perhaps? Maybe not, but it might be an idea anyways.
I really love that new instrument you added. It mixes well with the electric piano near the end as well. So it really fits the entire song nicely. And I love how it ends with the percussion clicks. Very nice there man. Very nice indeed.
This is definitely an improvement over the first cut. The one thing I'm not sure on is the bass. I'm not sure I heard any bass at all in the piece except in the beginning. I really think it would benefit from some very light, airy bass. Something where you mess around with the EQ and add some massive reverb to it. But then again, this is just subjective. So take it or leave it as you will.
I love the hits at 1:36 man. I'm listening to this a second time through, and they are so full sounding. Really man, you should use those in other areas throughout the song.
Overall though, this is really good. 5/5 and 9/10 overall. Very nice work here man. Very nice work indeed.
-Gravey-
P.S. - Please just call me Gravey btw. :-P I only added a "1" at the end of my name because "Gravey" was already taken. And I'm flattered that you thought my ideas were so helpful from the first cut of this. :-)
Wow. Thank you so much! I really appreciate the review, and I will consider your review in the next version of this song. (You convinced me to do another version) :D
I am not completely sure where the bass was in my song, what time frame were you referring to? (PM me)
I will call you Gravey from now on ;)