not bad
It's pretty good but might I give a few sugestions? First you could use a little work on sycronizing the mouth movement with the talking. Second try putting in some sound effects to fill up the awkward silences. And finally maybe put in some music. but overall it was pretty good
Hmm. Different.
Most of the jokes were either unfunny or were done in such a fast and incoherent way that they just didn't work. It needed some sound effects as well. Overall, it was alright, just not front-page material in my useless opinion.
WTF?
This sucked. The jokes weren't funny and the sound, if there was sound at all, was ill timed. The lip syncing SUCKED! Please learn how to be funny and how to use sound before you start to make "funny" flashes.
what was the point?
animation was smooth and at least you attempted at good lip synching.
The execution of the entire movie as a whole simply failed because of the poor writing and poor audio quality.
The "hate crime" joke was FUNNY BUT the fact that YOU mentioned ur movie has a "black guy, the American Dream" in ur AUTHOR'S COMMENTS section only to have him sucker punched makes it seem like you were trying to convey some malice thoughts. Why did you write that? Keep that shit to urself. Besides that i still recognize EFFORT and you surely showed effort. Keep it up.
0k this is not bad
it's nice but it lockes like Bonus Stage and High Score of toonzone forme matt ... but it nice any way ;)