INCOHERENTLY
Loved it, INCOHERENTLY
Reviews for "My GOD, Robots! episode 2"
the review of a lifetime
Now this will be the review of a lifetime for you.. Lets begin shall we? Lets start with audio, the great fundamental need that every cartoon has or needs, in this case you, you contain audio, but that f which is just plain humans, stupid humans... now the best thing to do for you, is to break away from these stupid humans or lets refer them to...wlll....blammed personnel, now you try to break away but you cant... y? becuase u need to edit, edit with all your might, in flash there is a bottom panel that will reduce your "mumbling" so everything wont be muffled, much like yours, secondly you need audio, audio of that is which compelling and flows with your cartoons, the much you have follows but you need more, as to make the cartoon "have a feeling" now the reason u didnt get blammed is because of your artwork, i admire your artwork greatly, you have good style and taste for a enthusiastic touch to a cartoon, I like your fast movement animation, very nice job, well done... moving on to writing, i can see that u have taken an oppportunate time to wrtiing thi script, but until we see sumthing big and following the story, your viewers will be bored as hell, they mite not necessarily blam you (becuase of your artwork) but your scores will eventually go down bits. What we have to see is that script writing and animation flow together, that is a key to well made animation, so in the end-clean up your voice acting-music-and a bit more enthusiasm in your script writing that flows AS enthusiastically as your cartoon
-TheMonkMob
Your style is unique and i really like it!
I agree that this could use some sound effects. If you make it with sound effects i would give it a 10! I'll vote 5 though cause it is just plain out awsome! I personally think htat you should start a series with all these characters. Can't wait for more.... its gunna be great!
Sweeeeeet!
Everything's great, apart from the writing, which is still good. I love the voices!
Preloader
mr. insomia777 eh?
nice dailogue and writing,
pretty funny and totally incoherent.
the animation was very silky smooth
and at a constant framrate, some of
the best fbf animations i have seen in
awhile. the characters out of body
porportions give it a very unique
look and sense of style. the voicework
further adds character to the characters.
though the absense of music and sfx effects
were a little disconserning and would of
improved the cartoon a lot more.
though in the next episode, could
you try to pace out the scenes a
bit more, it seemed a little too
fast to comprehend what is
going on and might of been
intentional. if it was suppose to
be...INCOHERENT! :P
though, an off topic comment,
do you have a profile on deviant
art's website? because i remember
seeing some animation test of the
characters in motion? either that or
your style is very similiar to his,
regardlessly, i wait for another
itteration of the series. oh yeah...
please add a preloader onto the
cartoon next time.
score: ****
kudos,
Mj