Good flash overall
A bit empty.. but thats alright, flashing is hard these days (without getting busted by the cops)
Good feel, some sound problems but thats ok, and a good intro, overall, Great :D
Keep it up!
Reviews for "The Hebrew Gymnasia"
ReporterClock responds:
thanks!
Great title btw
Okay, I have to admit that I laughed more than I should have at this XD
Especially at the end with the naked lady at the "Foamy" display. Oh, and of course "Why are we speaking English?! This is Israel!"
Only little nitpick is when you have the black and white scene with the "Windows XP" computer... the subtitles are nearly impossible to read. Maybe it you made them black instead of white?
Otherwise, great stuff... I'll be looking out for the next episode ;)
ReporterClock responds:
D'oh! I thought about leaving hte balck background for those. but then they'd hide the small bit fo the dress of the computer's! -_-;;
a work in progress?
I liked the flash and the movement of the pictures. Flash is often static. That is a problem with it. You corrected it very well.
The images and sound were good too.
As you pointed out it had no plot. A suggestion. Every spoken line and action has to advance the action of the script.
People who do commercials and PS spots live with time constraints. They have to get a point across with a beginning middle and ending in a limited amount of time. You had a beginning, a middle but no ending. That is the only problem I see with it.
Avendui
Funny
I liked it, not bad. But to tell you the truth, I thought the credits were funnier than the video ^^. Keep up the good work!
WTF, LOL, do me yeled! =OO
That was awesome~
Is Bar supposed to be a fakatsa? She looks and talks and dresses as a fakatza =)
(death to fakatzot!)
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ReporterClock responds:
sort of, she is a Bar. She's so... weird she has her own category.