Substance over appearance. Bravo!
When I come to Newgrounds, I hope to laugh, but rarely does it ever happen. I laughed this time. Thank you. And to think you got most of the laughs with nothing more than text. Amazing.
Reviews for "The Hebrew Gymnasia"
Tilts head*
So, I think your ending was better than the actual show, to be honest. "So, any hot ladies out there tonight?" Nice man, Thumbs Up!
FOREVER!!!!
a work in progress?
I liked the flash and the movement of the pictures. Flash is often static. That is a problem with it. You corrected it very well.
The images and sound were good too.
As you pointed out it had no plot. A suggestion. Every spoken line and action has to advance the action of the script.
People who do commercials and PS spots live with time constraints. They have to get a point across with a beginning middle and ending in a limited amount of time. You had a beginning, a middle but no ending. That is the only problem I see with it.
Avendui
Intresting, If you like being confused
Lucky for you being confused is fine by me.
But change the following if you can:
The White Subtitles in the B&W scene was hard to read. And Parts where girls sounded like men.
Overall Good Flash. Nice Grapics and sound.
i am proud to see more israeli artists,
it was absulotly amazing. hope to see more.
àúä òð÷ úîùéê ëëä!!!!
ReporterClock responds:
thanks, but I couldnt read what you just said in hebrew