Reviews for lll_Deception Part 4_lll

[S-Wilkins]

gj mate

graphics - good graphics here, except for a few points like when he is sitting on the steps at the start - you could always release a nu version with better graphics, and better lip-synching :D
style - nice style of drawing - you have clearly designed your own style
sound - good quality even though u were clearly sittin in ur roon with a mic :P u can hear the beeps at points :P
violence - obviously no violence here except for sum links - like with the katana sword
interactivity - nice menu set-up. easy to read and understand
humour - funny moments relatin to matrix aswell as pico, brackenwood, tomfulp etc - well basically newgrounds

overall 8 - could use some graphical improvements but had a nice style with good sound quality and humour for a newgrounds regular

Good Job Mate

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks a lot dude.
Glad you rather liked it.
That's an idea, I could release a new version of it when I get better at lip-synching and other stuff, but it won't be soon lol. Right now I just want to watch DVDs all day long. Good thing I'm on holidays.
You think I designed my own style ? Well thanks, that's good to hear, makes me feel special in a way! There isn't much violence for sure, but I rather focused on humour and graphics.

Thanks for the motivating review,
ALEX

[Svethogor]

LOL

This is cool dude, i laughed many times during the moovie.
Its funny how you "hid" *cough* your bad skills of mouth animation. Its ok though, every animator has some week spot.
The matrix part was hilarious too. God job.

alexsmolik responds:

Haha,
Thanks man, glad you rather liked it.
I'm pretty happy I made you laugh with this movie, it kind of is the point of it if you think about it. And yeah haha, I tried to hide my "lip-synching" skills as much as I could, in an ironic manner lol.
Thanks, and glad you liked it.
Thanks for the review.
ALEX

[The-Madness]

Good stuff!!

Wow that was really good. I loved all of the cameo's from newgrounds and the connections to the Matrix films. The one think I would work on is the mouths when doing voices. If the characters had mouths then this movie would have been great. The graphics and the voice acting were well and I found it to be very original in combining so many things together. Good job. Final score 7.

alexsmolik responds:

Hey !
Thanks man, glad you liked it.
I really need to start working on animation and lip synching, as you said. Because after all, you are right. It adds so much to the scene, it makes the characters look so much alive, it brings life to an animation. I did spend quite a time on the graphics, so I'm glad you like them. About the voices ... You thought they were good ? Really ? Haha, I thought people will hate my dirty french accent! Oh well, as long as people understand me, right ? :)
Thanks for everything and for the review.
ALEX

[HuIk]

Deception it is

Nice work mr.alexsmolik. I liked your use of shading and lighting to set the mood. I love how you had the inspiration for this project. Sometimes people have ideas and can't translate it into an end result. You however did it like a pro. I'm loving this series. Stay away from the bbs & keep kicking ass with the flash.

alexsmolik responds:

Hey man, thanks a lot for everything !
I'm glad you noticed the shades and the "lighting to set the mood". It was indeed my goal and seems like I achieved it ! I still can't imagine when I look at the first episode that I was the one who animated it. So weird how things evolve. And yeah haha, I don't go to the BBS that much, mostly because lack of time and interest, but sometimes I get my ass there hehe.
Thanks for everything and for the review !
ALEX