meh
Well... the animation is simply beautiful, but it is real hard to understand, and from what I was able to make out [about 70-80% after watching it twice] it's not all that funny. Timing is a big issue with this, you need more pauses and the like. Work on the timing and audio quality and this could be something great.
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jimm
Well, I guess...bluaaargh!
I think, there was some style in this but I couldn't figure out, where Oo I think, if the sound and the lipsynch where better, the video would be alot funnier...but anyways, thanks for reading...
Atrocious
At the very least, I should be able to understand what's going on in an animation, which really wasn't the case with this.
The art style was good, even if it was for the most part ripped off from Jhonen Vasquez. But the actual drawings, animation and backgrounds were sloppy and lazy. Spend some more time on this stuff.
The sound was atrocious. I couldn't hear what anyone was saying. Hire some real voice-actors. And from what I did catch this wasn't very well-written or funny anyway.
The music was good though.
Your pilot doesn't sell.
Can anyone actually hear what is said in this movie? It needs subtitles because I don't know if it was english or what. You need to learn to not deep throat your mic while talkings in it. Next, your story it pretty... crappy. You took what you thought would make a good idea, and you stuck it into a 3 minute short film.
Hey, you're fired, we're going to beat you up and throw you out the window. now you're in a can. your stomach gets ripped out by a robot. Hey you wanna come live with us? ok. GF becomes a demon and comes to kill you. THE END.... gay.
*#&%^ is all you can hear
i didnt get past the first min cause all you can hear is distorstion what did u record that with ?? were u yelling into the mic?? try again im about to watch ep 2 hope its better