Your pilot doesn't sell.
Can anyone actually hear what is said in this movie? It needs subtitles because I don't know if it was english or what. You need to learn to not deep throat your mic while talkings in it. Next, your story it pretty... crappy. You took what you thought would make a good idea, and you stuck it into a 3 minute short film.
Hey, you're fired, we're going to beat you up and throw you out the window. now you're in a can. your stomach gets ripped out by a robot. Hey you wanna come live with us? ok. GF becomes a demon and comes to kill you. THE END.... gay.