Great animation skillz, needs a fine-tune
I am gonna start by saying the animation was spectacular, very detailed and well done, much beyond my ability. The thing that really brought stuff down was the sound. Sorry to say but the voices were bad. The subtitles definitely helped but some stuff was just too soft or mumbled for me to hear. I know it would suck but recording and editing the sound again, then changing the number of frames in the tweens to match speeds to the new voice would make it seem ten times better. The other thing was that you seemed to be lost between a serious recreation of the film, and a humorous parody of it. The humor was okay, but it started without any humor for a long time. Add something a little slapstick silly to really make it nice. The sound is the main thing. Make your first full NG submission a great one and release a new version with at least new sound! You'll have great name recognition if you do!