This loop is missing a really important element.
(It's the Quickman drinking game! Count how many times I say Quick!)
I think this is good, but this is not Quickman material. It could be used as Quickman's gameover, defeat, Flashman's Flashy shot at him, or he is weakened.
Quickman. Quick. Quick!
This needs to be QUICK! Just listen to the original. Needs to be THAT Quick or higher. It is probably hard to create a faster Quickman remix. Yeah. But this is still good, as Quickman remixes are always amusing me :P
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QUICK QUICK QUICK QUICK QUICK QUICK QUICK (Haha)