Nice
Predictable, yet funny nonetheless. Who can't laugh at someone getting themselves torn to bits by a machine gun
Reviews for "Lucky Shot"
Woot!
I really liked it! I even laughed at the end.
cool
it was VERY short, but it was also pretty cool. i liked this animation.
Well, it all moved kind of slow.
Graphically it was most excellent. There wasn't much movement animation-wise. It started off slow and it truelly never picked up the pace. For more than half the flash it was their heads just scrolling around. I understand it was an introduction and it was suppose to go with the music to some extent but overall it was slow. And I don't feel the ending was really worth all the slowness. The music itself I must say got quite repetative and annoying. The ending of the movie was totally predictable and to be honest, it really wasn't funny at all. The guy said "Sorry". I think it was suppose to be Arnold Schwarzenegger or Sylvester Stallone, never do find out.
To sum it up, the things to improve would be:
Speed it up.
Add better humor.
More movement.
Maybe add the apple rolling off his head at the end and dropping to the ground showing that it was untouched. Might help with the humor you were going for.
cool
the 3rd dude break the rules!