caaaandyyy
once again, i find myself amused. and might i say, what a peculiar website you have! about as unorthodox as these animations! very innovative, my friend.
Reviews for "Story 3 - Mysterious Cave"
a lesson we can/should all learn from.
that was some excellent stuff :) very nice artwork in all of the slides, and it was good to see a lot of detail in all of the pictures. the sound effects were very fitting, but i think that they should be cut off when you click the next button after they start.
overall, very humorous. well done.
6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)
It was creative I'll give you that
But it wasn't really my cup of tea. No animation just pictures. (and if you didn't want suggestions don't post your work on Newgrounds, just leave it on your own site)
I can see what you were going for but next time make it longer or more animation
((( OK )))
Well its ok, no color kinda ruins it for me after watching the one with color, still its an ok slide show, but would love to see animation and color so notbad, but can be greatly improved...
~X~
Nocturnal-Devil responds:
i totally agree. i myself like the coloured one best. and it has a little bit of animation added in. i'm going to make my next ones a little more animated and definately coloured.
Attitude Adjustment
You need to learn to grow up. People have opinions for a reason. Don't post your work up if you're afraid of those opinions. Your art is lookin really good and have a confident line, but you're not going to be able to hold a job for any longer than a week or two tops if you treat anyone with less skill like they have no worth. There's no room for an inflated ego in this industry, Mr. Arshad.
Nocturnal-Devil responds:
well maybe you didn't know that these aren't the ones i use for work. these are the ones i draw in my free time just for fun.