You're dutch, aren't you?
The English mistakes seemed typical for dutch poeple to make. (You sit /at/ a table, unless you're actually sitting on top of it) and the A'dam and the poster saying Amster would suggest it takes place in Amsterdam.
Reviews for "Hitokiri act 2"
w-style responds:
hahaha yes... I'm dutch.. and I come from Amsterdam and that's also where it takes place.. altough I don't think I will make existing buildings and stuff like that (maybe)
and ps. it's people, not poeple:P:P (just kiddin')
like xin almost
it is some what like the xin series the guy is like a mixture of legend, guy, and xin
awesome graphics and story
i just wish there were voices so that my lazy ass didnt have to read all those words
A little bit of a dimension to this character.
Subtitles aren't to everyone's taste, but I'd personally rather have subtitles than a poorly acted or poor quality voice recording.
Your graphics, though far from the prettiest I've seen, are nice in parts with some decent fbf and a certain style to it all.
The whole school setup seems a bit of an afterthought, an artificial lengthener, after the previous one.
Still, it was a nice introduction and helps to set him up as an outcast.
The arm breaks a little too easily, with a real bend, almost as if he was snapping clay.
I think the character of the boy should be thought through properly before proceeding if you really want to make this a classic series, but he could become a fairly believable character yet. A tragic hero who lashes out too much when provoked thanks to his anger... I like that.
Not totally original, but nothing is. And there's differing degrees of originality and freshness.
I think you obviously have a great deal of talent and could definitely make a great series. Before you do the next one, I suggest you think a bit about the boy. Think about what's actually happening and plan roughly a few episodes in advance, if not even the whole series. I mean, better to end on a high note, and in the very long term, if this becomes a great 10-part series, you could then do a nice ending and start another series with a greater knowledge base, eh?
Ah, I'm rambling. Sorry.
But I did enjoy it and feel it has much potential.
good art work i gusse
i like the work but the story lacks a bit
kinda like : you killed mah faddah!!! dieee!!!!1111oneoneone
but i do indend to see your next one :D