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FINAL SCORES AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES
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Now personally, this was one of my favorites. It was HILARIOUS. I give it a 99 for comedy. However, the voice acting wasnt really VOICE ACTING... it was more like a guy just making up a story like on a radio show or something. There was only 2 people in your story talking so I couldnt really tell if you had any talent in voicing multiple characters. So anyway, thanks a lot for entering. CAUSE THIS MADE MY DAY. It was so funny. xD
Dylawrence said:
Suggestions: maybe have the other characters in his story talk as well, it might've been more enjoyable to actually make it seem like it was happening, instead of a dude talking the whole time (even though it's already been done)
Compliments: For what it is, it's such a good rendition of a kid bullshitting his way out of trouble, and it has nice humor to it