F'ing sweet!
Wow, that was so awesome! My fav part was when Solid/Liquid were fighting on Metal Gear, they looked like rock 'em sock 'em robots! I also loved when he kept looking at Meryl's chest and getting the sniper rifle blown out of his hand! Oh oh, and the guard lounging with the sun reflector! Man, I could keep going forever, this was so sweet! Okay, just one more, that you had the alt Otacon ending. That shows your true MGS devotion! The animation wasn't the greatest, but it's better than alot of others, and I can already tell you're improving, so keep it up, you're one of my Fav authors now.
P.S.- Sorry I wrote so much.