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I can see why you wouldn't make her walk, because the changing of the sprite would disrupt the smoothness of the whole thing, and there aren't any existing sprites of her walking forwards (unless you count the ending credits from metroid2, but there she's running). You also need a bit more storyline, and you should slow down the text a bit, but overall the depth and smoothness of the animation was great. You get a fav for art style.
Need to work on art!
I see that you have a lot of talent but you, you just seem like a slacker... get to work!
Presentation: From the begging you see some minor flaws but you see them. 7/10
Interface: No pause, no continue, to fast like to read text. 6/10
Sound: Well you had good sincro but no voice acting. 6/10
Music: Well actually you only had sync music. Add some author and original music. 6/10
Graphics: Sprites, it isn't really easy to get things well done with sprites, nd you didn't even make here walk... 4/10
Art: Well you had some good animations, great fighting scene. 8/10
Overall (out of 10): 5/10
Clossing comments: Get to work!
hey thanks, i was just looking over my old submissions and i thought you got it down to a tee. Thanks for the honest review, i haven't made anything since but if i do ever make anything else, i'll take all this into consideration.
I'd much rather play the game(any game).
The story was boring and so was the action. More action and better sound effects.
Awesome!!
Really good animation,but when she walked instead of making her walk forward you should have made her walk like a side-scroller,but great movie anyway.
"Claire"?
Who is Claire? And the sprites looked like you got them from Metroid Fusion, and Super Metroid.