Pure action...
Now, as an inspiring artist like yourself, I am sure you litsen to some people sometimes and take their advice. I am nt telling you are forcing you to take my advice, but I have some suggestions...
1) If you have heard of that new movie called Ong Bak: The Thai Warrior, its based around a guy going after a thief... now most martial arts movies (like Jackie Chan) contain "funny" parts in it... I kinda don't like that. I want to see a movie purely on fighting and a good story behind it. Those "funny" parts weren't that amusing, since they were around every single corner of the animation... I was hoping it would lay off the jokes for a little while and get straight to the action.
2) The story has potential and energy... thus making it a good story to bring in new characters from the "Mario" series... I forgot about Wario... I guess the next person would be Waluigi? I TOTALLY never would of thought you would bring Dr. Mario in, which is kinda cool. It's unique actually that you remembered him, but try and bring in a new person. Like an outsider that comes in from out of town with a gang of the "Turtle Shell" guys. Bring in a special kind of "new" story and have Toad fight more than one or two people in each movie.
3) The sound was alright, but I preferred what you originally did. The no sound thing was unique and no other artist did that and was paid respect to.... at least what I know of. The sound kind of ruined it for me.
I hope you can at least take consideration into one of these 3 ideas. Hopefully that you have the heart and brains to make another Toad's Rage 8..... hopefully you can make a lot of them, like what that one guy is doing with Broken Saints.....
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