Four months and you can't even spell in the intro
Why is there a flying green rake head on the grass in the beginning?
Reviews for "Reached Moon"
right on
4 months? youre pickin it up quick. well thought out and well done... a few minor errors but with your experience its easily overlooked. great work and keep them coming!
not bad at all the littel blue guy is kinda cute
great 4 age witch is a pluse i think its much hardder 2 make one with out wird stuff in it like you know i am sure u see em out thar some prett dum wird flashes any cool
good but lacking
you're still learning i think so i'll guve you the benefit of the doubt. you have a couple of keys weaknesses in your style the first being facial expressions that are inconsistent with the tone of the flash. for example the dragon's facial expression when he fails to fly in his first few attempts is far too comical considering the tone for which you were striving. secondly, if the dragon was so powerful that he could reach any place, why was he having such a difficult time reaching the moon? perhaps change the premise to a young dragon trying to prove his strength in the community of elders. in order to show that he is worthy of being "one of them" he must fly to the moon.
just a suggestion.
Magic wings for start on NG :)
Welcome aboard :)
I'm sure, that You will become great artist.
For now, this flash is charming, cute and somehow wise & sad.
It's style is a little too anime for my taste (I mean this graphic signs for dragon's emotions, but heart-eyes are really cute), especially when it goes with magic celtic music, so for me it's not nice contrast. By the way, I have to notice that You have some problems with a sound at the end of the movie.
Well, title is perfect :) It shows sadness of impossible dream, which makes his dreamer richer in his soul (bla, bla bla;). This little animal companion for dragon (squirrel?)... I feel it brings some joy to a sad end of the movie, somehow breaks loneliness of the dragon and shows that what is unreachable on the sky coud be find on earth.
Yea, I was bewitched with this (not to see some mistakes and unperfection), so to prove it my 5 goes to You :)