why
That was almost exactly the same as your other you sumbitted and it got blammed. You've got a good style dude, advance on it instead of making minor alterations to sumthing that got deleted and submitting
Reviews for "The ultimate short!"
Gunde responds:
Oh, I'm new here, I didnt knew it got blammed.. Does that stand somewhere? :S
nice
your drawing and animation was decent, but to reach your full potetnial you should work on a full blown animation, and then maybe one day we'll see you on the front page
Gunde responds:
Yeah, okay. I'll try to do that :)
uh....
hey, i liked that a little bit. but you need to make it longer.
It wasn't bad
I really liked the style, the drawing and backgrounds looked good, but I think I can offer you two tips. Firstly, don't call your film "the ultimate short" it will just make you seem arrogant, and thus people will start watching the film wanting to prove that this is not the greatest short, and you will end up getting a lower mark for it, and secondly the web is full of animations with people fighting for no reason, don't get me wrong, yours looks nice, but I've seen too many to remember yours. Try doing something new, something that isn't just two people having a fight, personally I would prefer you to make a short that is 90% plot driven, but if you really want to make a fight scene, give ti some story, and not the usual... you stepped on ym foot, so we shall fight to the death crap, have a proper plot. Do that and I'm sure you can go a long way. I wish you luck with your future ventures.
Gunde responds:
Thanks for the advice ;)
Short yet entertaining
Yes its pretty short but it has style. I always like a good fight scene and this has its moments with some work you could make a really good movie if you put a plot togther with action like this.
Keep it up