Never saw ur blammed one...
but this is pretty good.
I mean yea... it WAS short. But that's not stopping this from being a good flash.
Keep up the good work 2/5
Reviews for "The ultimate short!"
Sweet
We all need some random flying fight scenes. I liked it. Although a little bit of a plot would be nice, yet all and all, I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work, man! Rock on!
Gunde responds:
Thanks man! :D
It wasn't bad
I really liked the style, the drawing and backgrounds looked good, but I think I can offer you two tips. Firstly, don't call your film "the ultimate short" it will just make you seem arrogant, and thus people will start watching the film wanting to prove that this is not the greatest short, and you will end up getting a lower mark for it, and secondly the web is full of animations with people fighting for no reason, don't get me wrong, yours looks nice, but I've seen too many to remember yours. Try doing something new, something that isn't just two people having a fight, personally I would prefer you to make a short that is 90% plot driven, but if you really want to make a fight scene, give ti some story, and not the usual... you stepped on ym foot, so we shall fight to the death crap, have a proper plot. Do that and I'm sure you can go a long way. I wish you luck with your future ventures.
Gunde responds:
Thanks for the advice ;)
uh....
hey, i liked that a little bit. but you need to make it longer.
nice
your drawing and animation was decent, but to reach your full potetnial you should work on a full blown animation, and then maybe one day we'll see you on the front page
Gunde responds:
Yeah, okay. I'll try to do that :)