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Flaws
-Too Short
-Sound Quality is Horrible
-Doesn't have much relation to the title.
I think the idea was good by just seeing that "Fuck You" part.If you made a series that ran longer in length with better sound quality i think it would be awsum.
What's with the cigar?
Goths smoke cigs..
cigars are too much like taking a drag off a wang..Columbian drug lords have all their men smoke cigars to represent that they all suck the cartel leader's dick..symbolic submission..that's what i see anyway..
beyond the cigar, it looks like an OK start for a possible series of toons..you are following in the footsteps of illwillpress kinda so people will probably put you down for not being as good as them..you've got voices so thats a good start..he's aparently gonna be a jerk, so you better think smart with the content, unless all he's gonna do is say 'fuck you.' then you just have an asswhole..also, the theme song seemed kinda quiet..
you've got room for growth..but then again, i haven't seen your other toons..whatever..
It's a clove.
niiiice
That was pretty funny. I liked the song alot, its great because it's true, haha. I loved the words of advice, "Fuck You." That's how yah get when you spend your life trying to impress the goths :-). I also loved the purple hair... hehe
For all that it's worth
~Katie
Could be better
First off this was way too short and meaningless. The character drawings is ok but the piercing were poorly done, and it looks like a girl not a guy. The name of the coffe shop is cheessy, also goths don't smoke a cigar they either smoke pot or a cigarette. You need to make this a little bit longer. The little animations that it had were pretty good.
That was good
It was good, I'm impressed.