Not bad...
Uh...well, this is gonna be a toughie.
I liked the animation..the different tools and such, it gave it an interesting feel.
As for the plotline...well...it was a bit lacking.
The guy and girl stick figures blasting off on the end, and the Yahoo Chat style text was a little lame...
I hope that rocket was aimed at the sun...because two less people using those slang terms on the internet is a start in my books.
Keep it up...you did a good job, just needed a bit more thought and should have been a bit longer.