Now, dont be suprised...
I have actually given this a seven! Now, this is because, my films where like this, everyone starts as a begginer. (by the time I have watched this, u might aswell be an expert!)
Have you tried speedin up the frame rate? It might make it run smoother! Don't worry - I like to share asvice people have told me, its only fair we help each other!
Now, a good seqeuence, and if you make it a little longer, speed up the frame rate, and add more sound - you will have fans that would throw you a rose! Cupcakes all around!