the facts were really the only good part......when theres all the chemicals i suggest making them go a bit slower...i couldnt read all of them
good facts tho
Reviews for "Up In Smoke"
A question...
I won't rate this harshly, since it was, as you say, made for a class. But I would really like to know what the intro music was. You didn't say in the credits, and for some reason it sounds really familiar.
BlackFlameStudios responds:
sands of time - Evil-Dog
i seem to agree with you...
That's why I stopped smoking. There's nothing really good to me when doing that. It's just like taking a candy and after a few minutes you get addicted over and over again. By taking it, you die each moment :) By the way, your flash was good, nothing bad to it. It seems to fit the whole message though. Nice job dude, nice job...
(u there?...)
BlackFlameStudios responds:
ya im here. wat do u want? (thanx for the review)
not bad`
it was cool, but i especially enjoyed the music in this one. i love seeing animators using music from the audio portal, so good work there.
BlackFlameStudios responds:
ya it wud have been a steaming load of crap without the audio portal
I understand the message
Lets start the review.
GOOD THINGS
1. Your puting out information that could help people. Im not sure if that story about that guy was true but it sounds unreal.
2. The russian roulette thing was interesting.
3. The chemicals were very informative.
THINGS THAT NEEDED MORE WORK
1. The talking in the begging didnt sound good. Try using the mic a little better.
2. The animation was poor during the part with the russian roullete thing.
3. The chemical information went a little fast. And the color made it a little hard to read.
Over all it was a very informitive flash. Just some parts could have been better. At least your making flash to better of the world.
~M~
BlackFlameStudios responds:
K, this was a school project me and a couple freinds threw together for health (I didn't mention that in the comments because school projects always get blammed). And, no the story about Brad Bruce wasnt true. It was making fun of "Scary Harry", one of my neighbors. The sound sucked becuz:
1. It was run through my guitar amp becuz i cudnt find the adapter
2. I ran it through Acid Pro to change the voice.
Glad you enjoyed (some of) it