interesting idea...
The thing seemed fairly well thought out with a mixture of various forms of humour and a fair amount of plot progression.
The intro was interesting and the graphics were pleasing to the eye.
Although I couldn't make out every single word, the audio was fairly clear.
However, the jokes didn't ever result in a laugh from me. They always seemed to almost announce each punchline before it arrived, giving us too many clues about what was going to happen.
The ending was something of a surprise. However, maybe due to poor timing or imperfect voice-acting, it didn't really pan out either.