Reviews for \Zombies/

[finaloblivion]

not zombie like

i didnt feel any zombies in the mood or tone it is a sweet beat but it is more of a vampire feel and then towards the middle it starts to sound like DragonWarrior

[MikkMinehan]

Hey

I really like it

The bouncy happy feel is really cool

Adamaja456 responds:

thanks bro :)

[Gravey]

Interesting...

This has a pretty cool melody line in the beginning, but it is pretty simple. You should try adding some syncopation to the lead. That would make it more interesting.

You definitely should not drop out all the accompaniment throughout the song. Maybe change the instruments, but don't drop them out completely. It leaves those sections sounding very transparent.

Now the funny thing is, I hear a TON of classical music influence here. Almost everything in this song can be heard in a Mozart piece. Really man, this reminds me of Mozart so much. Obviously not the instruments, but the writing style.

*I've been playing piano since I was five. So trust me when i say this has a ton of Mozart in it. ;-)

I like the structure of the horizontally. It flows decently enough. But vertically you could do so much more to it.

Not a bad start though bud.

3/5 and 7/10 overall. Nice work here.

-Gravey-

Adamaja456 responds:

thanks for the good review man.

[SgtGirlygirl]

I shall draw a picture.

Do show you what kind of zombies are these.
<3
But thanks, though.. this is awesome. {:

Adamaja456 responds:

thank you <33

[Anti-Paragon]

What kind of zombies are these, exactly?

The beginning reminded me a little of tetris until the drum/pad beat came in. The drum beat really smoothed the beat well. The song is somewhat simple, and relys heavily on a repeating beat, but on the other hand the shifts in the beat are well timed, well executed, and transition perfectly. This more than counters the redundancy to make the song interesting. I would suggest working with altering the drum/pad beat other than simply turning it off at certain points. This is the only weak point in the song I can find, really. I'm surprised how well this song comes along as I listen to it.

I'm not sure what the title of the song has to do with the song itself. When I think of zombies, I picture a vile, staggering beat of terror. This tune is much more upbeat and adventurous. I just see the zombies prancing around in a field of flowers made of tetris pieces. Despite my criticism, my favorite part is 0:53 to 1:29 for actually stirring that image up. I definitely enjoyed this song.

Adamaja456 responds:

thanks for the detailed review. I think my main melody has a zombie feeling but rest of the song is too upbeat like you said lol.

But i promised my friend i would call the song Zombies before i started :D