Much better
Your lyrics have always been your strong point and it looks like the practice is finally paying off for you because your flow is so much better so no all that's left is for you to get a better mic.
Reviews for "Wyze - Penance"
Blasphem-E responds:
All right. Thanks for the look out and the words of encouragement along the way Dex. as for the mic, I'm planning on getting some adapters to send my mix through my mixer. Should be better quality then
Damn son
I really like this. Usually reverbing that much of a track doesn't work but I think it sounds really good here. Bomb flow and great mic presence. Just get a new mic lol. But I hardly noticed it to be honest. Great job here man, stay up.
4.16 / 5.00 (+ 0.17)
-Rooby.22s
Blasphem-E responds:
lol, I actually altered it slightly after Wyld's review. I had a really dumb intro that you could really hear mic crappiness in, so I cut it.
wow :D
I usually don't listen to hiphop, I used to listen to it alot some years ago, but my interest for trance just made me stop listening to hiphop.
Anyhow, awesome track, I guess I need to spend more time in the hiphop sections :D
The lyrics are catchy, and the rhymes and beat mix well together. No idea what "penance" means though.
The lenght of the track is perfect, and I love the piano. The drum beat is amazing too.
9/10
5/5
+fav :D
Keep it up Mike!
Blasphem-E responds:
Thanks for the review man. Glad you enjoyed it!
Hmm...
The vocals are on point, but you have the same problem I have with many of my songs... Just sound so pissed off, lol. The beat itself has great compistion, I just don't like the actual instruments used. (YEAH, YOU READ IT RIGHT IG!!)
But yeah, overall, I give it a 9 :3
Blasphem-E responds:
O SNAPS! SPAWN JUST SAID SOME SHIT TO IG! PASS IT AROUND!!! lol. Thanks for the review man, ya, I feel ya on the angry thing. It's hard to be loud and full volme and not sound angry
Man, harshness...
He doesn't like my instruments because they make him feel like less of a man. We all know his hatred for pianos is legendary!
Serious, good pacing on your flow, but I told you as much when you first showed it to me. And if it were recorded on a clear mic, this would be a definite huge track for you. Your style fit the beat perfectly, good layout of the vocals. Good job and keep it up. When you get a new mic, I'd be more than happy to show you how to mix your vocals and get that clean, pro sound.
Peace
Blasphem-E responds:
And Ingenius fires back! WHAT CAN HAPPEN NEXT?! STAY TUNED FOLKS!
haha. Thanks for the words man. And I don't know if I need a new mic. I figure I just need an adapter to run this through a mixer rather than straight to the laptop. But, we shall see. And I'll definitely take you up on the offer.