Reviews for Dream Breakers

[TrueDarkness]

Very nice...

I really liked the story line. You could add more sounds though. Also work on the voice acting. I didn't much care for the character drawings but the way they fought and the use of the magic powers was really cool especially with that red head girl. That scene was awsome. I liked your drawings and graphics like the church/chapel. That church place was VERY VERY well drawn. I really liked the movie and hope you will improve on the things I and many others have been complaining about. Great Job!

Maverick22 responds:

Thanks a bunch.
About the sound FX. They were cut do to the file size already reaching its limit. Everything will be improved upon. The Church was made by SirisX, he did an awesome job.

[ChaosEnthusiast]

Not bad,

but it could be a lot better, the voices were absolutely horrible, and need improvement asap. The subtitles were made way to big and were very distracting. You shouldnt have put their names with the subtitles every good author introduces characters not just starts them off like the audience knows them. Animation wise it was OK, not bad if your learning how to use flash but not great. The art was high quality tho which i liked. And that was about the only thing i liked the music was distracting from the voices and needs to be toned down a bit so the voices can be heard.

Maverick22 responds:

Thanks man.
No problem, The subtitles are already made smaller in Ep. 2. About the names. If you notice their names never appear until their names were said. For instance Gabriel was Spiky haired guy until his name was said over the phone. same thing with the girl, Her name said 'Girl' because her name was never said. same goes for 'Guy on Phone' Same goes for Joseph. his name never appeared until his name was said. He was known as 'Guy on Cross'
Thanks for the criticism and thanks for watching.

[CloudClone]

now i want more >.<

wow nice flash ^^ its almost like enitocin lol i can't wait till I can see more! the voices are a little distant not much humor but there doesn't always have to be humor ^^ bottom line: 8 (^_^)b

Maverick22 responds:

Enitocin?
Not sure who or what that is, sorry.
I guess this episode was too much on the serious side. I'll try and put some humor in the others.

Thanks for watching!

[QuickClaw]

i am the saviour......lol

awsome flash really cool cant wait for the second one

Maverick22 responds:

No problem, my saviour.
Already working on Episode II.

[Zeroninja]

Rock on homie!

....rock on

Maverick22 responds:

No problem Homie.
I will Rock on, Rock on hard!