what was oging on?
not a bad movie for your first submission, but i honestly was lost the whole time. like first he tries to shoot the muffin, then slice, gets trapped in a white area, then gets out and find his muffin. sorry, but it didnt make any sense at all. also, there needs to be some more sound. like when he uses his sowrds, "super powers" or whatever, there needs to be an explosion. otherwise, pretty good for a 13 year old
GOTCHA! more sound right. thank you much for the advice, and btw i was lost too.
Not ENTIRELY bad
Pretty awesome flash graphics overall. But, I had no idea what was going on. And not bad for your first submission, actually its pretty good.
thanks you!! pretty good is alrite with me :P! at least ive got the first submission out of the way with.
I don't get it
Nice animation for your first movie as a 13 year old, but it wasn't without it's problems, like what the hell was going on? I understand the person wanted a muffin, but other than that I had no clue what was going on. Work on the sound, or try to incorporate text into your next submission. Other than those issues, nice work.
thanks, i have been 'animating' for about 1 month just playing around. I think i should put more depth and story and...sanity, into it. cheers
Good
This is your first submission?. WOW.
yap 1st submission. I am pretty damn pleased with it!
not bad
i thought this was pretty good, maybe if there was music it would of been better ;P
My computer wont allow music into flash....*sniff* only sound effects...I mean come ON!! what is the difference!!how come it wont let music but sounds. grr.