Wow, dood! That's awesome!
But I need to ask you something. Are your characters your own idea or from somewhere else? It looks as if they're from a video game or something...but hey, what do I know?
Reviews for "Disgaea: Episode 2"
good movie.
But all girls doesn't have a voice? why?
Awesome. Better than the first.
I'm pleased to see you've made some improvements.
The white edges on the characters seems to be all but gone. I spotted it when the angel with the strange hat (who keeps saying 'Master Lamington') opened his mouth, even though that frame only flashed up. Nowhere else.
The plot and dialogue remains entertaining and amusing. I laughed out loud at the renaming and there seems to be some intrigue afoot, with possible backstabbing... intriguing...
There's still a lot of spelling mistakes. 'who's' should be 'whose'.,'visators' should be 'visitors', 'kowabunga' is normally spelt 'cowabunga', 'effect' should be 'affect', 'master' is once not capitalised, though it usually is.
'Nobody said ganging up on eachother' may be better phrased 'nobody said anything about ganging up on each other'.
The battleground is overly pixellated.
Master Lamington's voice seems a bit quiet in comparison to the volume of the rest of the game.
Though I've cited so many flaws, I really enjoyed this, thanks to the sumptuous sprites and engaging plot and dialogue.
I really like the way characters slide in during the fight. You use the various character models well and the presentation is rather nice now.
You've done well to bring this story to more people and I hope my comments encourage you to improve it further.
Had the graphics been made by you, they would have gotten a 9. Maybe even a 10. Instead, I give them an 8 again.
Had everything been yours, I would have given this a 9 overall I think. Instead, I give it a 6.
I look forward to hearing female voices as that's my biggest complaint with this one atm.
Also, remove the traces of white edges, maybe use a different font and have a replay button.
Also, maybe have someone check over your spelling for you. It really spoiled my enjoyment here.
HAHAHA!!!
Vyrus sounds gay. Is that his true voice? HA! I- I fell in love *slap* ... I hav a big o' crush on that devil looking girl. OMg wat is wrong with me? I feel ... weak ... Dammit ... She's too hot *slap* ... Great ... job ... U should give her a voice. I can make girl voices ya know. Even if ima boy. And I know the perfect voice for that ... hawt ... chick ... *slap x3* ... Pleez right a response and tell me her name ... pleez ...?
Pleeeaase take Vulcaus' voice away
jeese its so annoyin hearin him shout "Master Lemington" so frequently. It drives me insane. Other than that it was good but it only needs girl voices. keep trying.