Right
Well, I for one am not too fond of this cartoon.
First off, I seriously hated the music. Jesus, it was terrible.
The graphics were really good, nice job on that.
Something bothered me when you saw the cats paws moving when they were walking from up front (ok weird sentence..) cant put my finger on it tho, it felt unnatural.
Another thing that bothers me is that the cats - they're IDENTICAL. Except for the color, it's a bit bothersome, tho understandable, but therefore the cats lack in personality.
I would have liked to see a bit of a storyline, why were they fighting, what happened? I think showing that bit wouldve been more interesting than this entire movie.
Cat training in martial arts.. hmm why not? It's kinda cute, but what the hell? It doesnt USE any of it's skills (or not in a sense that the public can see it). I liked the slow mo kick it did while training, nicely animated. What's the point of having the cat train when you have such an anticlimactic fight?
A dustcloud covering the action? C'mon..
I thought the cats would fall in the water or something, but they find fish. Hooray? So rather than fighting they stuff their faces? They couldve done that from the beginning already.. Unless maybe one of the cats stole the other cat's food, of which he/she didnt have much.
Possibly..
Anywho, great drawings, nice animation, TERRIBLE TERRIBLE music! (seriously, the submissions with crap music get the harshest reviews =/ sorry), not such a great storyline and all in all anticlimactic.
I want to see more of your work though.
greetings,
~BellClock