I dunno
cus well im not really all that capable of thinking cus you blew my mind =p
I was gonna recomend the overlaping of screaming and singing then it was like...ohh never mind lol
Maybe you shoulda had the last word or the last few dragged out a bit longer?
dunno just a tiny pointer but what can i say I only play guitar and can barely do that so I shouldn't really say anything
And uhh tabs to that solo would be really nice or like just anything. You'll get full credit and everything if your worried about me being some kinda...uhh copy cat (for lack of better words)